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This page is intended to give you an inside view of how the
work was produced.
When I have had chosen the topic about Detroit in English,
it was my aim 'to realize the uttermost realizable' for school.
That was the beginning of extensive work.
Right from the beginning, I was very ambitious about what I
would write and therefore I am a bit disappointed with
what I finally took down. I would have needed about 500 extra
pages to express what I actually wanted to say. Nevertheless,
in some way I achieved my goal by composing a comprehensive
'term paper'.
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| ...in a quick overview. (Click
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These
were the topics our teacher had proposed to
us for our essays (in January 03); we could also
hand in some fields of interest we are interested
in, my suggestion was 'something about Computer
and/or economy'. The suggested topic for me had
the following title: 'Silicon Glen - success or
failure?'.
I wasn't that interested in this and information
gathering would have been a real problem, hence
I decided to take the subject about Detroit and
don't regret this by now. Though, I think, chosen
theme no. 1 would have resulted in less work. |
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An early version of the structure,
corrected slightly by my teacher (dated 07/13/03).
Meanwhile, I already started reading books about
Detroit (see below for the ones I've bought/borrowed);
I have read all of them quite thoroughly, if it
was related to my issue).
Unfortunately, I don't have a shot portraying me
while reading *G*. |
| If you can decipher my scribble, you
might read a 5 pages long brain storming, written
somewhen in August. |

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Around 12/11/03: during a rather
long discussion with my teacher, we (or he) corrected
parts of my now greatly elaborated structure - you
may want to compare his scribble to mine ;).
However, I did not start to write
on my essay until Christmas holidays (I originally
intended to write the work completely in summer
holidays, but I had better things to do, in fact).
And due to some, well let's say personal problems,
I did not manage to write it completely in the period
of time around Christmas either (hint: I got quite
ehm.. exhausted on New Years Eve... resulting in
some kind of personal crises). So the writing was
even further delayed. You can hardly imgine my degree
of my guilty consciousness. But finally, around
01/26/04, I had a very first version of the essay.
You probably know what was going
on then: I
posted a link of this version in the Detroitian
"Discuss Detroit" Internet forum, asking
for opinions etc. I then got mentioned three times
on Crain's
Detroit Business (Editor's Choice column), received
a lot of feedback and managed to complete
the essay in the last week (adding pictures, trimming/correcting
document and so on). Thanks to the encouragement
of so many people, I finally enjoyed
writing!
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After all, I must admit that I am not fully content with what
I wrote. Somehow I have the feeling that the essay is a lot too
short and therefore not all aspects are covered, missing important
topics. On the other hand, I have written about twice the normal
amount of pages that I was supposed for this school work. I was
caught in a dilemma and had to make a compromise, though I could
have worked out about 500 pages without repeating myself.
| Absolutely
essential... |
| ...was the usage of some resources
and equipment listed here. |
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The online dictionary of leo.org
as it provides loads of synonyms, when you look up
a single german word. Also idomatic expressions are
available, enabling a more sophisticated style of
writing (not claiming that my style is sophisticated,
but without the translator, the work would have gotten
awful, at least the variation of language ;)).
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Another important tool used
was the hard-disk translator from babylon.com,
also giving the meaning of a English/German word by
the stroke of a key. I recommend this program to everyone,
as it is quite fast, relyable and provides hundreds,
no thousands of different dictionaries available online
or through download; for instance, you can translate
from English into Russian or from French to Dutch.
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Probably one of the most important
things: I used StarOffice (or the nearly identical
but freely distributed openoffice,
freely distributed!) in order to write and layout
great parts of the text. This was very crucial factor,
as it eased the work unimaginably. One can use templates
for paragraphs, create listings as the table of contents
in no time, just to name two reasons. But the most
important fact is that it never crashed my PC during
the three weeks of extensive writing work. The "other"
word processor from that big company everyone knows
about crashed after 10 minutes when I was trying to
do the most simple tasks. This made the decision to
transfer from the Microsoft product to another text
editor quite easy (for those who paid attention: YES,
I used still Microsoft Word for the grammer check).
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Also kind of useful was the
employment of a dual-head display at my computer (see
here). For all non-technic geeks out there: with
this equipment, you can use two monitors while working
on one computer. For example, you can look up a german
word in the translator of leo.org
on one screen, while simultaneously write in the word
processor on the other.
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Another very important point:
the library as a source of uncounted books. See, I
am really not a denier of the Internet or other computer-related
stuff. But in the Internet, most of the time, you
just find very insufficient information about any
topic you have to write more than 10 pages. Therefor
I lent about 17 books at our local library (the
rest of the books given in the bibliography were bought
at amazon.com).
It is really unbelievable how much books are available
through interlibrary loan! Even about, well let's
say, unpopular topics in Germany, like the one of
the development of the City of Detroit, you find quite
an impressing number of books related to the subject.
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This point normally should
be mentioned at first, as it is the most important
one (but you always preserve the best for the end,
don't you?): the aid of real human beings,
as there are:
> My parents for paying the electricity
bill and backing me up.
> My teacher, Mr. Heller, for
giving me precise annotations regarding my work.
> And last, but definitely not least:
the uncountable encouraging, kind, helpful responses,
opinions and statements of so many people from the
States. Each single feedback absolutely excited me,
your help finalized my work in some
way! This week is definitely one of the most thrilling
ones in my entire life.
Thank you ( in alphabetical order):
Aeb, Bob Allen, The Aram, Atl_runner, Lowell Boileau,
brand500 (kinopravda - Maxpraxis), Brasziz, Brian,
Bvos, Carptrash, Christine, Dag, Mary Jo David, Cheryl
Denman, R. Sue Dodea, Vic Doucette, Dougw, Fho, Goat,
Anthony Hiller, Richard Hinks, Roger Imerman, Itsjeff,
Jeff (Jelk), Jeff Jones, Jim, jt1, Jeff Katz, kazooexplorer,
Michael Körner, Einar 'Carptrash' Einarsson Kvaran,
Lurkerer, Marcnbyr, Peter McNally, MikeM, Mind_field,
Jason Myers | Myers, Paul, rockstarchitect, Michael
Rosar, SAN, Steve, UrbanTiki, Karen Van Antwerp, A.
Grimace Virden, Frances Warren, Zoot and all those
I have forgotten. And once again: Thanks *G*.
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| The
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| ...I have used are enlisted here.
If available, linked to amazon.com |
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• Carlson,
L.H., Highland Park oder die Zukunft der Stadt,
Berlin, Aufbau Verlag, 1994 - A German one but not
that informative - rather portraying some 'typical'
Detroiters.
• Catanese,
A.J., The politics of planning and development,
Beverly Hills, SAGE Publications, 1984
• Cohen,
I., Echoes of Detroit: A 300-Year History, Haslett,
City Vision Publishing, 2001 Bought at amazon.com.
If you are interested in sports history of Detroit mainly,
go ahead and buy this one.
• Darden,
J.T., Hill, R.C., Thomas, J., Thomas R., Detroit –
Race and Uneven Development, Philadelphia, Temple
University Press, 1987 Good book about the 'uneven
development' and the racial issues, though a bit old.
• Duncan,
O.D., Social change in a metropolitan community,
New York, Russell Sage Foundation, 1974 You may call
that book outdated, though it contains basic information
about developing a metropolitan area
• Farley,
R., Danziger, S., Holzer H.J., Detroit divided,
New York, Russell Sage Foundation, 2002 Actually a
detailed analysis of a survey, but containing very informative
charts and conclusions.
• Gavrilovich,
P., McGraw, B., The Detroit Almanac, Detroit,
Detroit Free Press, 2001 Bought at amazon.com. A must
have for everyone coming from/to Detroit. Contains plenty
of informations, is written in a very entertaining style
and you just enjoy browsing this book.
• Georgakas,
D., Surkin, M., Detroit: I do mind dying. –
A study in urban revolution, London, Redwords, 1998,
updated edition Popular book, though not very much
related to my topic. Employees are in the center of attraction.
• Hartigan,
J., Racial situations: class predicaments of whiteness
in Detroit, Princeton, Princeton University Press,
1999 Reads somehow like a novel, depicting daily life
of stereotypes like 'hillbillies'.
• Henrickson,
W.W., Detroit perspectives: crossroads and turning
points, Detroit, Wayne State University Press,1991
This one is more or less a collection of poetry and essays
related to the whole history of Detroit. For my issue
not that important.
• Hill,
E.J., Gallagher, J., AIA Detroit – The American
Institute of Architects Guide to Detroit Architecture,
Detroit, Wayne State University Press, 2003 Bought
it at amazon.com, portraying several buildings of Detriot.
In my opinion, the pictures are not that good
and a lot too small. Though some interesting
points get mentioned.
• Kannan,
N.P., Downsizing Detroit, New York, Praeger Publishers,
1982 Old book about the economic transformation of
Detroit. At least I could extract some basic economic
progression.
• Sinclair,
R., Thompson, B., Metropolitan Detroit: An Anatomy
of Social Change, Cambridge(Massachusetts), Ballinger
Publishing Company, 1977 An old one, too. Did not
concentrate on it.
• Mason,
P.L., African Americans, labor and society organizing
for a new agenda, Detroit, Wayne State University
Press, 2001 Not that related to my topic.
• Mathewson,
K., Financing the metropolis, New York, Praeger
Publishers, 1980 Old, maybe outdated, not the easiest
to read but also giving you basic information about the
involvements of 'financing the metropolis' Detroit.
• Maynard,
M., The End of Detroit – how the Big Three lost
their grip on the American car market, New York,
Currency Book, 2003 Up to date, used it a lot. Unfortunately,
the portrays of the imports are too long, the ones of
the Big Three too short. Actually, you cannot use it for
macro-view reflections.
• Meiklejohn,
S.T., Wages, race and space: lessons from employers
in Detroit’s auto industry, New York, Garland
Publishing, 2000 Also not that related to
my topic.
• Sugrue,
T.J., The origins of the urban crisis: Race and inequality
in postwar Detroit, Princeton, Princeton University
Press, 1996 Sugrue argues that the 'origins of the
urban crisis' in Detroit emerged in the two decades after
WWII. He may be right, but he concentrates too much on
the past.
• Thomas,
J., Redevelopment and race – Planning a Finer
City in Postwar Detroit, Baltimore, The Johns Hopkins
University Press, 1997 Good book, sometimes hard to
read. Includes the contemplation of racial and city planning
issues. Exhaustively!
• Thompson,
H.A., Whose Detroit? : politics, labor, and race in
a modern American city, New York, Cornell University
Press, 2001 Race, unions and employer-employee relationship;
read just parts of it.
• Wolman,
H.L., Agius, E.J., National urban policy: problems
and prospects, Detroit, Wayne State University Press,
1996 Not directely related to Detroit, though some
important facts can be read. Just read a small part of
this one.
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